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One of my friend told me that writing diary in English is the good way to learn and practise English. So I wanna create this topic as a diary online for everyone. And you can write down everything happening in your life, in English. Now, I'll begin it first!


It's raining outside. I'm sitting in my office room but still can feel the cold. It make me homesick. Suddenly I'd like to visit my hometown right now, just in order to embrace my mum. Hope that Lunar New Year's day will come soon.
 
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I'm sitting here in the boring room
It's just another rainy Wednesday morning
I'm wasting my time
I got nothing to do
I'm hanging around
I'm waiting for you
But nothing ever happens and I wonder

----quoted and edited from Lemon Tree lyrics -----
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bCDIt50hRDs
 
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Tomorrow will be Thursday. Haha. It's the day I'm looking forward, the day that I'll get the first "The Saigontimes weekly" at home. It makes me happy.

One new member of GPE wanna make friend with me to talk in English. Oh! That sounds interesting! Due to this forum, I have many friends, one person with one characteristic. I can learn so much from them, about love, the life and the behavior, etc. Just wanna say thanks to all of my friends!
 
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Hi big family. this is the first time comming here but I feel that, the topic is very interesting. I've just made friend with a girl in here, she's very lovely. I hope that we can share and help together something, not only in English enviroment ;)
 
Be bored with my present job. Huhu. When will you turn back your target, Bich Thuy??? Now I'd like to cry, cry alone. I hate working here!!!!!! I hate it!!!!!
 
Today, I feel very tired and sleepy.

 
My baby tramy, the cheettit told me to correct his student's mistakes, would you mind?
I'm sitting in my office room
I'm sitting in my office
It's the day I'm looking forward
It's the day I'm looking forward to
one person with one characteristic.
Each one has one's own characteristic.
Be bored with my present job
Be bored with my current job

Dear the princess Gon:

Why don't you write more than one sentense? (èo)
 
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I'm very busy so I'm tired today, i am listening to the song "hello". When i hear it i miss him, i want to sit beside him, he hugs me and he says he loves me very much! Oh my cheettit!
 
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The song "hello"

Actually, that song sounds as gentle as a whisper. Thanks thuyhang.
 
@ Ms.Ngoc Mai: Thanks Ms.Ngoc Mai & Mr.Cheettit! I'll pay more attention when writing. Thanks once again!

Oh, I've just come back room after eating "bo bia" & roasted octopus with OverAC, Cadafi & Jenni. It's very interesting & funny. We sat together on the sidewalk. It was cold & windy. But I felt so warm, due to OverAC's jacket. Oh, It's very kind of him to lend me. Hehe.
My dears,
"Bo bia" & roasted octopus was very delicious. Hi. Thanks to two handsome men & one lovely girl!
 
I've just come my office. It's not rainy now. But I still can feel little cold. The road seems to be wider, and vehicles seem to be less than yesterday.
How beautiful my life is!
 
Who make me feel bored? Maybe one of those persons of "friends" of mine!
 
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Who make you feel bored, Mr. cheettit? Tell me!
 
Who make you feel bored, Mr. cheettit? Tell me!
Tell you? What will you do with him/ her? I even don't know who he/ she is.
No, thanks!
It is my destiny, I must resign it by myself. Not many persons (less than the number of my fingers) could share my confidence (included you, the sorceress!)
 
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Today, Hanoi: rain, cold.

Remember !
 
Hihi, this evening I talked to Ms.ngocmaipretty by English. Her voice sounds very nice and is much more wonderful than voice of any princess on earth. I think anyone who have heard her English must be as lucky as winning lottery. Some people would never have chance to listen to her. She said that tomorrow she will come to drink coffee with me. Oh! How nice she is.
 
Look at me, you can feel a funny man, maybe never sad. You can see me with a man who usually makes people smile, rarely makes someone be roussed to tear, also.
Looking back myself, for the past few days, I've really been pitiful. I didn't feel happy, when the day my lovely girl didn't care what I said.
Lying here, in the boring room, I'm thinking of you, my girl, I'm missing you so much...
 
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This morning, I met my handsome teacher, Cadafi, Hangsf2 and Mr.Hoa (a new member of GPE) at Khuc Giao Mua coffee shop. We had coffee together and enjoyed "Sweet and sour baby dracontomelum" (Sấu bao tử) sent from Tigon (one of Mr.Cheettit's students). How delicious it is! I wanna say thanksgiving to Tigon about this present.
Then my handsome teacher took hangsf2 and me to go for eating and drinking (corn milk). I came back home at 1PM. And now I prepare for going to dancing class at The Youth Culture House. How an interesting my Saturday is!
I heard the sound of an Japanese film from the next room. Ja, It's a long time I haven't watched Japanese film. Missing it!
Tomorrow I have no plan. Maybe I will stay at home and prepare for my examination next week (the first exam will be Kaiwa on Monday). Ja, gambatte kudasai!
 
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Thank you have dishes like sweet and sour baby dracontomelum (sấu bao tử). I hope you will be invited to the dish in Hanoi

Tigon,
 
The day, when people takes rest, Hic, I have to go to my office. My work is not hard to do, but time do it really matter. The working time is not on shift, neither on office hours! Whenever (weekend, midnight, even Tet traditional or International Labor day...) my work finish I must be there, in my office to sign Final Report.
How bored!!$@!!
 
This morning, I met my handsome teacher, Cadafi, Hangsf2 and Mr.Hoa (a new member of GPE) at Khuc Giao Mua coffee shop. We had coffee together and enjoyed "Sweet and sour baby dracontomelum" (Sấu bao tử) sent from Tigon (one of Mr.Cheettit's students). How delicious it is! I wanna say thanksgiving to Tigon about this present.
Then my handsome teacher took hangsf2 and me to go for eating and drinking (corn milk). I came back home at 1PM. And now I prepare for going to dancing class at The Youth Culture House. How an interesting my Saturday is!
I heard the sound of an Japanese film from the next room. Ja, It's a long time I haven't watched Japanese film. Missing it!
Tomorrow I have no plan. Maybe I will stay at home and prepare for my examination next week (the first exam will be Kaiwa on Monday). Ja, gambatte kudasai!

Dear my sister,

I understand your words are full of lofty sentiments, but you know, "thanksgiving", which you used is not in the right place. It's meaning "gratitude, especially grateful to the Lord". You could remember The Thanksgiving Day?
I mean, in a odinarily case we shouldn't use it. Because if in case that's more/ most important, what would we use? So, I think, we don't need to exaggerate a normally case. We should say "Thank you very much" is OK.
Do you agree with me?
Friendly.

To Mr. minhthien321:
You look like a straigthforward man, but I think, when offering a suggestion to someone, you need very delicate handling, more and more tactful.
Are you OK?
 
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1.
in a odinarily case we shouldn't use it.

What does "a odinarily" mean, candlelight?
2.
Why do you use an adverb to modify a noun?
3.
We should say "Thank you very much" is OK.
You have two main verbs in a sentence: to say and to be

4. What does straigthforward mean?
5.
you need very delicate handling, more and more tactful.
Which is the noun that the adjective tactful modify? the "handling"? May the handling be tactful? I think only a person can be tactful.
6.
Do you mean "Do you agree with me" or you mean "How is your health"?

In common, I can not understand some sentenses with their structures.
 
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1.


What does "a odinarily" mean, candlelight?
2.

Why do you use an adverb to modify a noun?
3.

You have two main verbs in a sentence: to say and to be

4. What does straigthforward mean?
5.

Which is the noun that the adjective tactful modify? the "handling"? May the handling be tactful? I think only a person can be tacful.

In common, I can not understand some sentenses with their structures.

I think, when writing fast maybe she makes some mistakes? It's not right, but it's OK. She needs more careful.
The main point of her is "...don't need to exaggerate...", I think so.

Thanks a lot CandleLight to show me some problem. I'll try my best!
 
Thanks minhthien321, for understanding!

Thank you so much, PTM0412! You're really a Professor!
 
Why do you say that, minhthien? This is the box of English, and I think we should correct our mistakes for each other, in order to improve our English skill. The cheettit man just only want all of us to be better.
Anyway, he ask Miss Candlelight some questions, and suggest her something, why do you answer on behalf of her?

Yes, all of us must be careful, we need to be careful, and we need more carefulness.
Thanks a lot CandleLight to show me some problem.

Thanks a lot, minhthien, for reading my opinion, and for telling us the main meaning of her idea.
 
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Why do you say that, minhthien? This is the box of English, and I think we should correct our mistakes for each other, in order to improve our English skill. The cheettit man just only want all of us to be better.
Anyway, he ask Miss Candlelight some questions, and suggest her something, why do you answer on behalf of her?


Yes, all of us must be careful, we need to be careful, and we need more carefulness.


Thanks a lot, minhthien, for reading my opinion, and for telling us the main meaning of her idea.

How nice! Thanks NgocMai sister for the red points.
 
I have just known who is the one that made me be bored 3 days ago. Yes, one of those persons of friends of mine.
 
I've just took a Japanese examination with the first section, Kaiwa (like speaking in English). Oh, it seems to be easier than my thought. But I didn't do it with all my best already. What a pity! Hic...I hate myself. The next section is Sakubun on this Wed, and the last one is Chokai & Pumpo on this Fri. Try your best, my dear!
 
Seldom seeing you appearing, but I know you always follow me quietly. I miss you so much, my girl!
 
Hanoi in frosty winter, keen cold season.
I let myself in state of neglect... my tangled heart.
Neglect drizzling rain, ... neglect biting wind...
Slowing-down ... drifting myself or turning the time pass by...
 
Haha. I've made friend with one member since last week. We are required by another to talk to each other in English. Our conversation is so interesting! Haha. Thanks my new friend! Wish you can find out your girl soon and will have a small happy family.
 
Tomorrow, I will come to a place where he used to be for the treatment.
I want to do like him to say "hi S.." but i cant. I will not stay there long because I will be alone and i'm afraid of missing him.

Bro, where you are now? where did you go in S?
 
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My boyfriend sent me a letter, he said that he missed me so much. At the end of the letter, he never forgot writing "ITALY". Do you know what meaning is?
 
I Trust And Love You
I Truly Always Love You
I'm Thinking About Loving You
 
True love can never alter,
True love can never die;
False love alone can fly
False love alone falter
Love, darling, needs to borrow

hix hix
 
Dancing with a handsome man. Oh! How interesting it is! Haha.
 
One person hit a foreigner by accident:

- I’m sorry
- I’m sorry too,
- I’m sorry three,
- What are you sorry for?
- I’m sorry five.
- Oh shit!
- Oh seven!
 
The student meets her cheettit teacher on Y!M:
- Hi thầy
- 4 trò
- !!!

Another time:

- 3 thầy
- 6 trò
- !!!

It is really cheettit!
 
Baby, baby blue
Baby I love you
Baby, baby blue
Be my lover like no other...
 
Today, my boy sent a mail for me, he's really romantic! he usually makes me discovering of him. And, as usual, at the end of mail, but different from the previous, he typed: 5201314.
What does it mean?
5201314 = I love you forever
If you wanna know how it does, don't hesitate to pick up the phone and call me! --=0
 
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I love this Topic so much, so I love the one who created this topic!
Thank Miss Tramykt! I love you!
 
I will face up to him one by one. --=0
The words "one by one" sounded the same as mine.
Hoàng tử đệ đệ chôm chữ đỏ đỏ cuả tỷ ha!

There are only over 2 weeks left to the date of new year. The more the teenagers wait for it, the more the old age be scared of it. Billions of thing to do, to worry, and to think about! Billions things to buy, to spend money. And billions of thing else!
 
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Could you know what means of 520 ???
Uhm! It is from chinese pronunciation.
5: Wu
2: ér
0: líng
"Wu ér líng" has the same pronunciation with "Wo ai nin" when you speak faster than normal style.
So 520 should be "Wo ai ni" = 我爱你 = I love you

The chinese often use this way. I have some of my Chinese friends hence that is the reason why I knew this way. Hehe...
For examle, the chinese use 88 to instead of byebye
 
Uhm! It is from chinese pronunciation.
5: Wu
2: ér
0: líng
"Wu ér líng" has the same pronunciation with "Wo ai nin" when you speak faster than normal style.
So 520 should be "Wo ai ni" = 我爱你 = I love you

The chinese often use this way. I have some of my Chinese friends hence that is the reason why I knew this way. Hehe...
For examle, the chinese use 88 to instead of byebye

What a wonderful man! Thank you very very much!

Look at my number:

0938 520 520
I luv You I luv You

Thanks Cadafi for this meaning!
 
Yesterday I had a Japanese examination. But I did it so badly already. Huhu. Maybe I myself understand the reason why so clearly. And now, suddenly I'd like to write down diary in Japanese everyday. But I can't use any Japanese letter on my computer. Huhu. The IT guy in my company already limited by administration account. Huhu.
From now, I must learn it harder by myself. Try, my dear. I believe in yourself, BT!
 
Uhm! It is from chinese pronunciation.
5: Wu
2: ér
0: líng
"Wu ér líng" has the same pronunciation with "Wo ai nin" when you speak faster than normal style.
So 520 should be "Wo ai ni" = 我爱你 = I love you

The chinese often use this way. I have some of my Chinese friends hence that is the reason why I knew this way. Hehe...
For examle, the chinese use 88 to instead of byebye

Well, my great brother! You're really my Idol... }}}}}
 
"What if you slept?
And what if,
In your sleep
You dreamed?
And what if,
In your dream,
You went to Heaven
And there plucked
A strange and
Beautiful flower?
And what if,
When you awoke,
You had the flower
In your hand?
Ah, what then?"
 
I'm very busy today. I waked up and got up early in the morning to go to my office to make many reports. In the afternoon, I had to go Binh Chanh to receive cargo from a shipper. This night, I've just come back my office to finish all documents which I did whole the day.
I'm too tired now. But feeling happy when taking a glance at this website. Relax!!!
 
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Oh. How happy I am now. Hihi. I've just finished the third section of Japanese ẽamination. Not very bad. Hehe. And suddenly I decide to pay a visit to Vung Tau tomorrow, just in order to relax and look the sunrise and sunset on the seaside. Hehe. Hope it will be very interesting!
 
One of my friend told me that writing diary in English is the good way to learn and practise English. So I wanna create this topic as a diary online for everyone. And you can write down everything happening in your life, in English. Now, I'll begin it first!


It's raining outside. I'm sitting in my office room but still can feel the cold. It make me homesick. Suddenly I'd like to visit my hometown right now, just in order to embrace my mum. Hope that Lunar New Year's day will come soon.

Thanks tramykt86nt for this thread. It is the only one of threads that I can post my feeling in.
It is such a long time since I came to this forum to ask about making clock by speedometer chart, and I have been satisfied. I also have some questions about Excel tool such as formula and functions.
But yesterday I cannot login and today I can not find the main web page. I have asked Mr PTM0412 and he tell me that the home page has been change from http://giaiphapexcel.com/forum/cmp_index.php into http://giaiphapexcel.com/forum/index.php. And he has also introduced me this topic either.

It is difficult for me to find out topics which related to my questions in this forum, so I have asked him in private, (sorry the forum for that), and he always help me. I have joined the ExcelHelp Forum, but members there are not as familiar as members in this giaiphapexcel forum. Especially this topic, it is great!

Thanks Tramykt86nt again.

Adams Roths.
 
Hope Our Love Lives And Never Dies
Thanks Miss Cadafi, it is so romantic the way you (Vietnamese persons) perform your love.
HOLLAND = Hope Our Love Lives And Never Dies, so meaningful and very lovely.
ngocmaipretty đã viết:
There are only over 2 weeks left to the date of new year
As I know, traditionally, your largest festival is the Lunar New Year, and as Mrs Ngocmaipretty said, it is coming. Let me say best wishes to all of you in this forum.

Adams Roths
 
Last week, my friendly friend sent me an sms to invite me for the first birthday of his son. I've just forgotten it until now, but time was past! He invited me at 11:00 AM. What would I do with him now? Hic hic. I have to say sorry to him and give a gift to the baby.
 
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I've just forgot it until now, but it was past!
Dear MinhThien,

The conjunction "but' is used to connect 2 clauses in the opposite meaning, for example:

- I have already forgotten it, but at last I suddenly remember. Luckily, I got at the party in time.

- I remember it, but at last I was too busy to go. I have another party that is more important.

You can translate your sentense into Vietnamese and see the meaning of it, and see whether I am right or not.
 
As I know, traditionally, your largest festival is the Lunar New Year, and as Mrs Ngocmaipretty said, it is coming. Let me say best wishes to all of you in this forum.
Adams Roths
Dear Adams Roths,

Thanks a lot for you wishes, Mr. Roths. The Lunar new year is infact the largest festival in Vietnam. In this occasion, we have 6 to 8 days off work. We come to visit each other, wearing new clothes, to wish together a happy new year. We also wish health to the old age, promotion to the working-person, good job to the unemployed, good points to the pupil, babies to the couples, and so on.

I hope that one day, you could come our country in such an occasion like this.
And he has also introduced me this topic either.
This topic and some others, were opened for us to improve members' Enlish skills. Our English is not much good, so we have lots of mistakes. Would you please join this topic more regularly to help us?
It is difficult for me to find out topics which related to my questions in this forum, so I have asked him in private, (sorry the forum for that), and he always help me. I have joined the ExcelHelp Forum, but members there are not as familiar as members in this giaiphapexcel forum.

Mr Ptm0412 is the most fastidious in this forum, it is the reason we call him the "cheettit" old guy. Other members are more familiar, you could gradually investigate.

Cheer, Adams,

Ngoc Mai,
 
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Where are you now, ngocmaipretty? Someone remember your birthday, someone wish you, someone want to be your student, and someone . . .
 
Oh my girl, I've just heard your voice on the line, how nice you are! What a beautiful afternoon!
 
Well! Today is the first day of Lunar New Year!
Last year I have a topic of "First writing in New Year", and this year I would like to do so, right in this English Diary topic!

Best wishes to all members of GPE, best wishes to all of your family, best wish to all of mine too!
 
I have one

You have one

Your mother uses your father's one

And your auntie uses your uncle's one

A married lady would acquire one

But a divorced lady would lose her one

Arnold Schwarzenneger has a longer one

Michael J. Fox has a shorter one

Madonna doesn't have one

The Chinese usually have short ones

While the Indian usually have long ones

Do you have one?

How long is your one?

Which one is your preferred one?

what you are thinking of?

go down......
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Answer : its your Surname, what else?
 
There was a young man, who wanted to change the world.
He found, it was difficult to change the world, so he tried to change his nation.
When he found he couldn't change the nation, he began to focus on his town.
He couldn't change the town and as an older man, he tried to change his family.
Now, as an old man, he realize the only thing he can change is his self, and suddenly he realize that if long ago he had changed his self, he could have made an impact on his family.
Their family and him could have made an impact on their town.
Their impact could have changed the nation and he could indeed have changed the world.
Now it's not too late, we're still young and we still have time...
Let's not concentrate on the world itself.
Start from the bottom...


Just for joking!

A man and his wife were in a court for their divorce case.
The Problem was who should get custody of the child.
The wife screamed and jumped up and said: "Your Honor. I brought The child into the world with all the pain and labor.
The child Should be in my custody. "
The judge turned to the husband and said: "What do you have to Say in your defense?"
The man sat for a while contemplating. ..then slowly rose. "Your Honor... If I put a dollar in a Pepsi Vending Machine and a Pepsi Comes out...
Whose Pepsi is it... The machine's or mine?"
 
Need Washing?

A little girl had been shopping with her Mom in WalMart. She must have been six years old, this beautiful red haired, freckle faced image of innocence.
It was pouring outside. The kind of rain that gushes over the top of rain gutters, so much in a hurry to hit the earth it has no time to flow down the spout.
We all stood there, under the awning, just inside the door of the WalMart.
We waited, some patiently, others irritated because nature messed up their hurried day.
I am always mesmerized by rainfall. I got lost in the sound and sight of the heavens washing away the dirt and dust of the world. Memories of running, splashing so carefree as a child came pouring in as a welcome reprieve from the worries of my day.

Her little voice was so sweet as it broke the hypnotic trance we were all caught in, 'Mom let's run through the rain,' she said.
"What?" Mom asked.
"Let's run through the rain!" she repeated.
"No, honey. We'll wait until it slows down a bit," Mom replied.
This young child waited a minute and repeated: "Mom, let's run through the rain."
"We'll get soaked if we do," Mom said.
"No, we won't, Mom. That's not what you said this morning," the young girl said as she tugged at her Mom's arm.
"This morning? When did I say we could run through the rain and not get wet?"
"Don't you remember? When you were talking to Daddy about his cancer, you said, 'If God can get us through this, He can get us through anything!'"

The entire crowd stopped dead silent. I swear you couldn't hear anything but the rain.
We all stood silently. No one left.
Mom paused and thought for a moment about what she would say.
Now some would laugh it off and scold her for being silly. Some might even ignore what was said. But this was a moment of affirmation in a young child's life. A time when innocent trust can be nurtured so that it will bloom into faith.
"Honey, you are absolutely right. Let's run through the rain. If God let's us get wet, well maybe we just need washing," Mom said.
Then, off they ran.

We all stood watching, smiling and laughing as they darted past the cars and yes, through the puddles. They got soaked.
They were followed by a few who screamed and laughed like children all the way to their cars.
And yes, I did.
I ran. I got wet. I needed washing .
Circumstances or people can take away your material possessions, they can take away your money, and they can take away your health.
But no one can ever take away your precious memories.
Or your faith.
So, don't forget to make time and take the opportunities to make memories everyday.
And take time to run through the rain.
 

Circumstances or people can take away your material possessions, they can take away your money, and they can take away your health.
But no one can ever take away your precious memories.
Or your faith.
So, don't forget to make time and take the opportunities to make memories everyday.
And take time to run through the rain.

That is great! When we kept wonderful memories in the old days make us happy-=.,,-=.,,-=.,,
Sometime I also run though the rain and listen to " Rhythm of the rain" and sing................Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain. Telling me just what food I've been. I wish that it would go and let me cry in vain. And let me be alone again. Suddently..............how long will be rain again in my soul, never again-\\/.-\\/.-\\/.. What will be will be-=.,,-=.,,-=.,,
I always beleive my self by side my family whom make me happy all my life........I never give up my furture so anybody at any situation.......Enjoy my life today better than yesterday-=.,,-=.,,-=.,,
 
WHY STUDENTS FAIL IN EXAMS

It's not the fault of the student if he fails, because the year ONLY has 365' days.




Typical academic year for a student:

1.
Sundays-52, Sundays in a year, you know Sundays are for rest. Days left 313.

2.
Summer holidays-50 where weather is very hot and difficult to study.Days left 263.

3.
8 hours daily sleep- 130 days GONE. Days left 141.

4.
1 hour for daily playing- (good for health) means 15 days. Days left 126.

5.
2 hours daily for food & other delicacies (chewing properly & swallowing)-means 30days. Days left 96.

6.
1 hour for talking (man is a social animal)-means 15 days. Days left 81.

7.
Exam days- per year at least 35 days. Days left 46.
8.
Quarterly, Half yearly and festival (holidays)-40 days. Balance 6 days.

9.
For sickness- at least 3 days. Remaining days=3.

10.
Movies and functions - at least 2 days. 1 day left.

11. That 1 day is your birthday.

How can you study on that day??????!!!!!!!!!!

Balance = 0

"
Then how can a student pass ??"
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I have just received email from Ms Erika and Mr Bill affter they came back home. They are from Australia to Vietnameses to say about the God. I met them when I returned highland coffee shop to visit my staffs. Store manager at there introduce me to them , so I left at there 3 months ago. After that I promised with them I will return shop to get their name card to keep in touch. After that I sent email to visit their family and take care their health and something like that.

We plan to return to Saigon when we can. And we will meet again. We know you are a strong lady and we like that. It is good to get ahead in life and have a vision of what you want[FONT=&quot].
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When I read their feelling about me, I dont know I am happy or sad.......Ofcourse when I become strong lady that was so good look like they said. But sometime I need to gentle, I need some blind and some stupid... maybe I will comfortable. I would like to back a little girl , I would to back old my house, I would liike something like that and more more.........Dont go too far, I am living for simple and furture.....But If I have wish I will wish the time come back again and forever at that time....That is the best my memories![/FONT]
 
I am scare...............I need alone to think about someone, I need the god give me some power to do something, I need to live security and good health....I need anymore....
Remember that, another chance may come up. A new friend, a new love, a new life. I never give in anything..................
$$$$@::?>>

 
Remember to love yourself, Sarah!
Maybe it's time for me to look back myself and have to pursue my goal. Try my best!
 
Maybe I should not go to meet him again. Nothing to say, nothing to be happy, and nothing to wait..............I will go ahead and dont look back althought you will be there. Good bye my memories, my happiness and anything about you...... I Cry


 
Lần chỉnh sửa cuối:
Maybe you are crying and you type something wrong, my dear ChuotCoi!

- Maybe I sholuld (should)
- nothing to happy (to be happy)
 
Maybe you are crying and you type something wrong, my dear ChuotCoi!

- Maybe I sholuld (should)
- nothing to happy (to be happy)

Thanks teacher, But I never drop my tear by anyone except my family-\\/.-\\/.-\\/.
I am watching Brazil and Northerland match. That is great and I hope to Brazil win tonight/-*+//-*+//-*+/
 
I am watching Brazil and Northerland match. That is great and I hope to Brazil win tonight

I am watching the Brazil and Nertherland football match. That is great and I hope that Brazil would win tonight.

Or:

I am watching the football match between Brazil and Netherland.
 
I don't know how I feel and what I'm thinking about now. It's so bad! I hate this place! I want to go far away from here. I know exactly that no one can help me except I myself. But sometimes it can't be.....
I wish I can cry right now......
Feel alone........
 
Chỉnh sửa lần cuối bởi điều hành viên:
Sorry tramy, I did not know what happend when you called me. So I got out to smoke!

If I did know, I might have shared what you are feelling, and what you are thinking. Perhaps . . .
I hate myself!
 
I don't know how I feel and what I'm thinking about now. It's so bad! I hate this place! I want to go far away from here. I know exactly that no one can help me except I myself. But sometimes it can't be.....
I wish I can cry right now......
Feel alone........
I don't care what you thinking, I don't care what you feeling. I am not the one that can share everything with you but I can stay with you for your weeping out. And the most important is I can treat you a couple of grilled chicken legs with chilled beers. @$@!^%&&&%$R
 
I don't care what you thinking, I don't care what you feeling. I am not the one that can share everything with you but I can stay with you for your weeping out. And the most important is I can treat you a couple of grilled chicken legs with chilled beers. @$@!^%&&&%$R
Thank you! Thank you very much! Suddenly I hate everything. I want to go far away from here. I want to cry now.
Lastly, I have nothing............
Feel lonely...........
 
Lần chỉnh sửa cuối:
I miss my family, my mum, my dad.....

Let me go home.....

Suddenly I'd like to see Da Nang bridge at night......

See you next week, Da Nang City.......

Waiting for that day.......
 
Dear Tramy san!

Today, I very happy to make your acquaintance!
and thanks for chat with me!
I hope next time , i will chat with you more than.
Though i have never seen u but i think you're an interseting girl!
hihi.
 
Dear Tramy san!

Today, I very happy to make your acquaintance!
and thanks for chat with me!
I hope next time , i will chat with you more than.
Though i have never seen u but i think you're an interseting girl!
hihi.

Hi haphuongkid,
Thanks for your praise. But, the fact might not have been like that ;)
Wish you happy Sunday! Nice to talk with you.
 
Pencil: I'm sorry
Eraser: For what? You didn't do anything wrong.
Pencil: I'm sorry because you get hurt because of me. Whenever I made a
mistake, you're always there to erase it. But as you make my mistakes
vanish, you lose a part of yourself. You get smaller and smaller each
time.
Eraser: That's true. But I don't really mind. You see, I was made to do
this. I was made to help you whenever you do something wrong. Even though
one day, I know I'll be gone and you'll replace me with a new one, I'm
actually happy with my job. So please, stop worrying. I hate seeing you
sad.

I found this conversation between the pencil and the eraser very
inspirational. Parents are like the eraser whereas their children are the
pencil. They're always there for their children, cleaning up their
mistakes. Sometimes along the way, they get hurt, and become smaller /
older, and eventually pass on. Though their children will eventually find
someone new (spouse), but parents are still happy with what they do for
their children, and will always hate seeing their precious ones worrying,
or sad.

All my life, I've been the pencil. And it pains me to see the eraser that
is my parents getting smaller and smaller each day. For I know that one
day, all that I'm left with would be eraser shavings and memories of what
I used to have.

This is to all the parents out there.
 
This morning, when I signed in Yahoo messenger I received your offline messages. I call these ones are offline messages because we all are invisible, received partner’s messages but don’t want to reply instantly. You sent me the song with title “All out of Love”, what do you want to tell? Is it the lyric also is what thing you want me to understand?
You’re right when you say that I also hurt. Do you know every time I talk to you my tear always drop? You make me realize that we have not smiled together for a long time. However, I am suspicious about your love. I don’t believe in our love before, when you said goodbye, I so hurt but when you came back I didn’t accept you. Until now, when I know I am still loving you and you also want to hold me, I scare of your love. I am scared of your saying in the future, I am also scared of your change, and I am also scared of your blame for my fault in the future... I am scared of anything...
I believe you will be you without me, please understand me. If I come back and love you again, what will people say about me? I make sure that they will blame on me, criticize me... You will love me or you think of their saying? I know it’s not too late when we realize that we’re so wrong. Day by day, we are still heart-broken, but don’t ask me what I am thinking of; I really don’t know what to do now.
I don’t want to take your heart away, don’t want to give your life away. I understand your sadness: I know the feeling of you while seeing my face anywhere, even if you close your eyes, and I also miss you when I am close to my bf but we can’t be together again. I wish I could:
Take your hand to guide you home
Warm your soul
Mend your broken heart
Heal your heart
Your world is not grey, it’s not cold, and you will not be lonely... Believe tomorrow you will be happy because you really love someone and that person is happy. No one can’t be replaced and in your heart I am not the only.
Thanks for your love.

Written for a long time ^^
 
Lần chỉnh sửa cuối:
Dear ngoinhahoahong,
May I suggest something within your writing?
1.
I am scare of your love. I am scare of your saying in the future, I am also scare of your change, and I also am scare of your blame for my fault in the future... I am scare of anything...
I think we should use scared instead of scare, it must be an adjective there.

2.
Day by day, we still hurt, ...
This sentence is the same, we should use: we are still hurt.

3.
In this situation, I will use "I am sure that ..."

4.
I see the feeling you see my face everywhere, when you close your eyes you also see me,
I suggest:
I know the feeling of you while seeing my face anywhere, even if you close your eyes.

Anyway, your feeling is honest and your writing is very good. Thank you very much.
 
Dear ngoinhahoahong,
May I suggest something within your writing?
1.
I think we should use scared instead of scare, it must be an adjective there.

2.

This sentence is the same, we should use: we are still hurt.

3.

In this situation, I will use "I am sure that ..."

4.

I suggest:
I know the feeling of you while seeing my face anywhere, even if you close your eyes.

Anyway, your feeling is honest and your writing is very good. Thank you very much.

Well noted with many thanks ^^
I will write as followings:
1. I scare of your love. I scare of your saying in the future, I also scare of your change, and I also scare of your blame for my fault in the future... I scare of anything...
2. We still hurt because "hurt" is a verb.
3.
I know the feeling of you while seeing my face anywhere, even if you close your eyes.
I do not want to make mistakes again. However, I hope you will advise on writing again if I make mistakes ^^
Thank you.
 
Well noted with many thanks ^^
I will write as followings:
1. I scare of your love. I scare of your saying in the future, I also scare of your change, and I also scare of your blame for my fault in the future... I scare of anything...
2. We still hurt because "hurt" is a verb.
3.
I know the feeling of you while seeing my face anywhere, even if you close your eyes.
I do not want to make mistakes again. However, I hope you will advise on writing again if I make mistakes ^^
Thank you.

1. While using scare as a verb, it means you scare someone, or you make someone to be scared of you.

(Nếu dùng Scare như là 1 động từ, nghĩa là bạn doạ ma ai đó, hoặc bạn làm cho người ta sợ bạn chết khiếp. Eo ui!)
Với lại, dùng scare làm động từ thì không có of nữa.

2. Similarly, using hurt as a verb, that means you hurt him, and he hurt you, you are hurting together. But through your writing, I understood that you only be hurt by him, and, he hurt himself. Or I miss something?
 
Lần chỉnh sửa cuối:
Dear Mr Ptm0412
Thank you for your teaching

I have a closefriend, she has just said goodbye with her boyfriend and she came to find me for lament. I recommended her that
"sometimes you should let your love fly out, to see if it is strong enough to come back to you"

According to you, is this sentence correct??
 
Lần chỉnh sửa cuối:
Dear Mr Ptm0412
Thank you for your teaching

I have a close friend, she has just said goodbye with her boyfriend and she came to find me for lament. I recommended her that
"sometimes you should let your love fly out, to see if it is strong enough to come back to you"

According to you, is this sentence correct??

Your sentence is actually correct in grammar, and you used the correct structure.
Anyway, I wonder if you are asking about the sentence itself, or you are asking about the idea of you to advice your friend?

According to me, in such situation, we could let the love fly out to try if it would fly away or it would turn back. But it is dangerous if you try it without any trouble. If there is no trouble, I mean both of the lovers are happy together, DO NOT TRY.

I have another advice:

Keep and hold, until it remain worthy.
You can not hold anything that is not yours, even though you tie it by any kind of rope.
 

1. While using scare as a verb, it means you scare someone, or you make someone to be scared of you.

(Nếu dùng Scare như là 1 động từ, nghĩa là bạn doạ ma ai đó, hoặc bạn làm cho người ta sợ bạn chết khiếp. Eo ui!)
Với lại, dùng scare làm động từ thì không có of nữa.

2. Similarly, using hurt as a verb, that means you hurt him, and he hurt you, you are hurting together. But through your writing, I understood that you only be hurt by him, and, he hurt himself. Or I miss something?
Thank you very much for your advices ^^
1. I agree completely with you about "Scare"
2. I want to say that love was far-away but both of us are very sad. I just know "hurt" is a noun or verb, if I use "We are still hurt.", I think there is something wrong because "are" is not used with "verb". So I do not know how to express my sadness now. Please advise me how to do if you have free time.
I appreciate your kind helps. Thank you very much again.
 
Lần chỉnh sửa cuối:
I forgot one thing: I used "we are hurt" last time because I would like to use passive voice (be + PP). "Hurt" is an irregular verb and the three types of it, (the infinitive, the past, and the past participle), are the same words.

You can find some irregular verbs here: http://hocmai.vn/mod/wiki/view.php?id=18771&page=b%E1%BA%A3ng+%C4%91%E1%BB%99ng+t%E1%BB%AB+b%E1%BA%A5t+quy+t%E1%BA%AFc

Yeah, I also forgot that.
Thank you very much.
 

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